Good research gathered. Here’s my review of the old remarks first, then the rewrite:What’s Wrong With the Old RemarksToo long – almost certainly over 2, 000 characters as written.Specific issues:Repeats the same idea multiple times (“thriving commercial corridor” … “proven high-traffic location” … “strong fundamentals”)Use-case list is too long – dine-in, takeout, catering, delivery, tiffin, cloud kitchen all in one
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